He's a morning person and I'm a night owl. That's just one of our differences. But it plays a huge role on why we didn't work out (hence my other story 'how we ended') . That's also why I used sun and stars as metaphors, representing our way of life. What he wants VS what I am. Did it seem like it was written by a kid? Cause I am not a kid. I feel like my words were too simple, I always seem to write with much simplicity. Idk if that's a good thing or not.
Although It was based on real events, I just feel like something's missing. Any suggestions?
@LettersFrmBelle So I guess "Stories do get better with help". :)
So I wrote this story quite quickly. It was a self-challenge. I just asked myself, can I write a story in an hour? Then this line came to my head - 'Love like you're about to miss it.' So I started thinking, and then I started typing. This was the result. If you've read my stories before you know it's not easy for me to keep things simple and short. So I do tend to write about hopeful things and such while dabbling with some darkness and reality. Like this post title suggests, I like writing love stories that aren't about a love story, but everything around one. Does this story do that well? Is the ending ambiguous enough? Perhaps the title could be more exciting. I can't tell, I'm too close to it I guess. So if you have any feedback on the ending or title suggestions or just thoughts on this idea, let me know!
This is my first piece of work and any comments or suggestions are embraced.
You have talked about my favorite hobby. I have a dream to roam the whole world and to write a book of the world and for that I need to travel. So your story enhanced my willing power to get journey.
I know the end but I'am not being able to reach there.
When your conversation starts you end up your story. I think you should have describe about your story's title more. But writing style was good.
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