i honestly don't knownif this is any good but I performed this omce during a spoken word event and I'm just starting but i wanna know what you guys think..
I try to create fiction out of reality but I just can't seem to turn fiction into life. Help.
@AyusheeMishra I'm so glad glad someone replies to me! Thank you! Suggestion well taken. :)
I've been keeping my works n my phone, never tried sharing it cause I feel so not confident bout my own writing and feel like mine's not good enough. Been comparing my works to others' as well, i'm too discouraged that I locked my feelings for writing deep in my heart. But i was inspired with one of the writers here and decided to give it a try again and here, I came up with this. Please do tell me your opinions. It'd be absolutely helpful. :) thank you.
Thank you for sharing your opinion, @coffee :) I'll keep that in mind and brainstorm ideas. :)
hello, it would really help to get advice upon the writing style. i felt as if the thought broke a little in middle and also i would like to move towards simpler words. specially looking for adding depth, how to form layers! thanks for your time and input. good luck!
It's my first time to write a poem that doesn't rhyme so I really can't judge if this is a fail or not because I didn't follow any rules and I don't even know if there are rules to follow. So, if you have such a kind heart to give me critics, suggestions or feedback about this, I would really appreciate and take it as a challenge to improve my future write-ups. Also, I am still new here in Launchora so I guess, this can also be a line to be friends with any of you. Thank you everyone! :)
Oh, thank you so much for that appreciation! :)
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