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Astonishing Love

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Tonight, as I gaze at the stars,

I see the universe in your eyes.

the looks that keep the fire from

within.


I'm really glad that you let me in

I know it's hard to trust but love, believe me, just hold me close

cause I don't have a plan to let you go.

I loved the way you brush my hair on my face


the way your lips taste

you held, you cared

you hugged and kissed

It is amazingly natural


God knows how I wanted to give

you every piece of my soul

Love, you brought a different light

to my life, that's something else.


How amazing how powerful your love

can lead

and your smile can bring


You stayed by my side through

hard times, you help me grow and see

the collateral beauty in life.


You open my eyes and see through things

that I didn't know that exist

You encourage me to the things

once I thought impossible

You teach me how to believe in myself when I don't

oh, such a powerful love.


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launchora_imgMagwayen Pearl
6 years ago
Ahhh, I fell inlove.
launchora_imgZeus Compay
6 years ago
Thanks :)
launchora_imgTia Writz
6 years ago
Beautiful; D.....keep writing
Plz have a look at my works too
launchora_imgZeus Compay
6 years ago
Thanks :) and yes i will take a look :)
launchora_imgTia Writz
6 years ago
your welcome♥
launchora_imgHera Bai
6 years ago
You teach me how to believe in myself when I don't good one. You right. love is powerful.
launchora_imgZeus Compay
6 years ago
Thanks for reading it :)
launchora_imgFaded Letters
6 years ago
It's really beautiful and well put together! :)
launchora_imgZeus Compay
6 years ago
Thanks :)
launchora_imgChristine Nicole
6 years ago
woahh! Beautiful poem! :D
launchora_imgZeus Compay
6 years ago
Thanks :)
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