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An eye for an eye.


In a big and dark room, Suzanne is alone until Brad and his accomplice Robert come in. Brad brings a chair and sits in front of Suzanne. He leans his two elbows on his knees and his chin on his hands and starts staring at her.

                                          BRAD (after a while)

Do you know why you're here? I mean.... the reason why you're abducted...Oh ! I forgot... (he looks at Robert)... She can't talk !

                                                                                       They laugh. Brad stands up.

                    

                                                           ROBERT        

Shall I call him now, sir?      

                                                  BRAD ( excited )

Yes ! Yes, please .  

                                                                                                                            ROBERT  ( provokes Suzanne )

The phone's ringiiing...    

                                    DAMON

Hello?

                                                          ROBERT  

Hi! Is this Mr.Damon Smith?

                                    DAMON

Yes ! And...you are...?

                                    ROBERT

Wrong question.

                                    DAMON

Look ! I'm busy so....

              ROBERT ( interrupts him )

Suzanne Miller...

                                                DAMON ( confused )

D-D-Do you know her?

                                    ROBERT

Oh ! She's here..... with me....

                                    DAMON

With you?!! What do you mean?

                                    ROBERT 

I mean.... I kidnapped her....

                                    DAMON

How dare you? If you touch her....

                   ROBERT                            

Save your drama, lover boy ! Listen ! You have half an hour to come to the Abandoned motel on the outskirts of the city.... Don't be late....and.... don't tell anyone.... when I say anyone, I mean anyone.

                  DAMON                           

I don't understand. That's.... bullshit ! Why would I come? People are kidnapped for financial reasons.... 

                                     ROBERT 

So, you think it's a joke?

                                                          DAMON         

No, I don't think it's a joke. I'm sure it is!

                                    ROBERT

At least,... what do we have to lose?.... a bullet?!!

                            BRAD ( takes the phone from Robert)

25 minutes left.... ( He rings off )

                                    DAMON

Hello ? Hello ?

                                                      ROBERT

Do you think he's coming ?

                                                                                            Brad smiles...

                                   BRAD ( sits in front of Suzanne)         

Your boyfriend is coming. ( takes the adhesive tape off  her mouth ).

                      SUZANNE                               

Aîîe! .... ( takes a breath ) I don't have a boyfriend... Look ! I'll give you money.... Isn't that what you want? I'll give 10.000 $... No, 30.000$...

                                                                                               Brad is laughing.

                 SUZANNE ( confused )        

Did I say something funny?

                               BRAD ( becomes suddenly serious )

 I'm not doing this for money.... Your lover..... Your lover killed my wife.... MY WIFE! ( starts to whimper ) Yes ! The only women I loved.... An eye for an eye.... and a girl.... for a girl.... He took my girl away.... So I'll take his away....

                                                               SUZANNE                            

To kill me? Why? What is my fault?.... I....ah ! Oh my God!!

                           BRAD                                 

What is your fault? ( he smiles ) you seduced him.... that's exactly your fault!

                               SUZANNE                              

I don't know what are you talking about... seriously... Nobody's in love with me!

                              ROBERT                              

Except Damon Smith...

                              SUZANNE                          

Who? I don't know him....

                                                                  BRAD                      

But he knows you.... he's crazy about you.... that's all that matters... at least, to me!

                                         SUZANNE                     

Nonsense...

                                          BRAD ( calm )

Oh ! Didn't I tell you?...... He bought a house in your neighborhood, just to see you everyday... ( gets closer ) just to be by your side!

                       SUZANNE  ( angry )

SHUT UP!

                                                Robert goes towards her, but Brad stops him.

                                                        BRAD          

I found this in the trash can... a letter he wrote to you....  ( he opens the letter ).... oh ! Do you want me to read it for you?

                                       SUZANNE                                 

No, thanks...

                                                                    BRAD          

But I insist... " Dear beloved,..."

                                         SUZANNE  ( ignores him )                                 

I'm not listening... 

                                                                    BRAD          

" Dear beloved,..."

                                                                   SUZANNE     

Stop it!

                                                     BRAD      

Rob, would you please make her shut up?

                                                                       Robert puts the adhesive tape on her mouth .

                                                                    BRAD     

Thank you... ( takes a breath ) " Dear beloved,

I really don't have the words to express myself.... I'm merely in love with you... and I would be glad if you accept to join me for dinner at the restaurant near your house at 8:00 p.m . All I'm asking you is a chance... Please, give it a try! I know you will make the right decision.... D.S"

                                                 He stares at her for a few seconds . Damon comes in.

                                                        BRAD

Well, well, well, .....  Mr.Damon Smith !

                                                                      DAMON ( surprised )

Oh my God! It's..... unbelievable....  Your wife is.... Jessica Brown !

                                                                      BRAD

Right ! You remember her... ( he looks at Suzanne ) I guess I won't forget her name... after she dies... what do you think?

                                           DAMON  ( stressed )  

No ! Please... Let's.... let's talk...

                BRAD                 

About what? The past?  I refuse to lead that conversation.

DAMON

I'm sorry, ok? I-I-I tried my best to save Jessica...

BRAD

Oh come on ! You didn't try.... we both know that.

DAMON 

Operations fail... 

BRAD

You mean " surgeons fail "... or ...." loser surgeons fail"...

DAMON ( he cries )

I blamed myself ! She died because of me...

BRAD

You're right because of you.... and ...because of you.... Somebody will die too... Today... here...

DAMON

Oh ! I'm begging you... I'll do anything....

                                                                                              Robert claps Damon.

BRAD 

Anything?

DAMON ( confident )

ANYTHING!

BRAD

I just want you to sit down and watch... ( wears the blouse and the gloves ) ... and feel pain .... just as I did 3 years ago. But you know what is the difference? You won't be disappointed; she'll certainly die... and I'll make sure to tell you how sorry I am when I'll finish my operation.... 

DAMON

Why are you doing that? Why?.... ( he tears ) If everyone has to revenge themselves, then when would it end?

BRAD

Then, you didn't have to start it in the first place...

DAMON  ( on bended knee )

Oh Suzanne! I'm sorry....

BRAD

Rob, what do you want first, the heart or the liver?

ROBERT

Mmmmmm.....( winks at Brad ).... intestines! 

BRAD

Good choice, sir! 

                                                    They laugh. Suzanne is afraid....

ROBERT

I love scary movies!! ( To Damon ) Do you?

DAMON

Wait ! Can I talk to her?.... For 10 minutes, please.

ROBERT

You have been waiting for 3 years, you can wait for a few extra seconds !

BRAD 

.... 5 minutes!

                                                 Damon approaches to Suzanne and sits nearby.

DAMON

I'm sorry because we had to meet in such circumstances...

SUZANNE

That's it? That's all you can say? Sorry?!  ( she cries )

DAMON

I....I want you to forgive me...

SUZANNE ( rebel )

I can't... I can't...

DAMON

Ok ! Don't fogive me then... just.... don't forget me....

SUZANNE

You're kidding me ! ( To Brad ) Sir, can you kill me, please? I don't want to talk to this clown anymore!

                                                Robert takes Damon away from Suzanne.

DAMON ( shouts )

I'm not about to let die, I promise...

                                                Suzanne swallows her saliva...

  BRAD 

Are you watching closely? ( he laughes )

                                           Suzanne screams. Brad lives the room; he looks for the saw...

DAMON  (to Robert )

Look ! I'll give you anything you want.... I just want you to help me.

ROBERT ( whispers in Damon's ear)

1 million $.... Do you have it?

DAMON

I'll give you two millions !

ROBERT ( smiles )

What should I do?

DAMON 

Kill him....

                  Brad comes in. He sits next to Suzanne and prepares to start. Robert lets Damon go, gets a stick and hits Brad ....

SUZANNE ( trembles )

Why did you do that? 

DAMON

To save you....

ROBERT

Can I get my money?.... now

DAMON ( holds Suzanne's hand )

Sure... 

ROBERT 

She'll stay here... I can't trust you...

DAMON ( Smiles )

Ok ! Ok !... Suzanne, I'm really sorry.... Everything will be just fine.... I'll come back.... Don't panic....

ROBERT

Be quick !

                                Damon leaves the motel and goes to the ATM to withdraw money. He puts it in a briefcase and goes in hurry to reach his beloved.

DAMON ( gets in the room )

I'm baaaack! 

                                 Damon looks for them in every corner, but they're gone.

DAMON

No, seriously? We're not playing " Hide and seek" ! ( obsessed ) Hello? 

                               He suddenly hears some sounds out there. He looks through the window; the police rings the motel . 

DAMON

Oh SHIT! 

                            He finally understood what happened: Suzanne paid Robert to revenge herself too!  

DAMON ( kicks the briefcase ) 

I shouldn't trust him... I shouldn't....

                            He looks for a way out....