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Typer Head #101 [Pilot]

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Well, let's get this shit started!

So, as you guys can see, I am registered with the name Anonymously None. But we do need a name for our protagonist character. So let's call him Nikky. Now what about Nikky?

Well, as my intro says, Nikky is a Colossal Fuck Up! So here is Why. Well to begin with this, we need to know a little bit of his background. So here is a Flash back in Kamikaze style.

So Nikky was born in a middle class family who lived in a small city. He lived with his joint family till he was Ten. Well his dad never completely lived with him till then, because he used to work in another town and used to come home only for the weekends. His dad was strict and not around all the time, so he ended up have a little distant and awkward relationship with his Dad. His Mom was really sweet but a little strict at the same time. Well, let's fast forward a little. Now at Ten he moved to another small town where he ended up being the complete outsider. He made friends pretty quickly despite being an introvert. A few years go by and puberty hits. He is still a Fatso while his classmates were either skinny or lean, both better than him. He had never felt bad about his body before, but now he did. So he started going on morning runs. Well they didn't really help and he gave up pretty soon.

Fast forward to senior secondary, and he is still fat. Got a lot of friends, and well still hasn't asked a girl out. He thinks of joining military so starts going to gym. builds a frame and looses some weight, but still doesn't loose the fat tummy. Goes through a change of heart and takes up engineering instead. 

Well to be fare, he was pursuing engineering before he thought of military. He was always smart so that worked out in his favour. Well, Nikky always had potential but was lazy as Fuck. 

Now that we have his Background, Let's Finally begin his story...

He joins a Private Collage and finds himself in a crowd of strangers. Well to give you a better perspective, he was in a collage known for its rich heritage and rich culture. Well, rich here is with respect to financial status. Well, it wasn't that he couldn't fit in, but that he couldn't afford their company. He ended up spending a giant sum of money in the initial months of his stay there, trying to match his friends. He found himself in a fix when his father asked him about the spending. He tried to dodge him as much as he could.

To give you a little insight here, his father was always quite strict, but when he moved to his college that was well... quite far from home, he got soft.

The semester ended and he came back home. His father confronted him about his spending and asked him to keep it under control. Next semester, he ended up borrowing money from his friends and by the end of the second semester, under debt from almost all his friends. He paid them off as much as he could by making up fake expenses to his father. 

Through this he learned not to have take money from friends. Well, second year strikes and he is still a virgin and still hasn't asked a girl out because of his inferiority complex. By the end of his third semester, it just so happened that he took a girl out, well without even asking her out. He had a little crush on her from the second semester, but while being out with her, he didn't feel any spark. It all felt quite bland. The girl was beautiful and seemed to be showing interest in him, but out of thin air, he just couldn't feel the attraction that he felt all through the second and third semester. This made him immensely confused. 

Now this wasn't the first girl he ever had a crush on. He had a major crush on this girl, from his high school, who well considered him a friend. He was good at writing and had recently started writing a few chapters for a novel he wanted to write. He shared those chapters with her, thinking it would impress her. And well they actually did.

And then the awesome part came when she said to him: I didn't know you were a guy who had feeling toward girls.

WTF!!! what did she mean. He asked and she replied that she thought he only cared for studies and stuff, well that was enough to crush Nikky down to pieces but he continued trying to impress her. But well it didn't really work and then in the third semester when she posted a picture with her boyfriend, he went into panic. Well he knew it was coming and she was like the most popular girl where ever she went. He came out of panic and it just so happened that he just stopped having feelings for her. It all just went away. 

Well That's a lot of Introduction, Next we'll start his story in the present...


If you like what you read, Give it a like and I would love to see what you think, so don't forget to comment. And will come back will Typer Head #102 Soon.

Till Next time... XOXO


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launchora_imgLaunchora User
4 years ago
Hello i am miss brenda i have private disscusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)
launchora_imgSawyer Hughes
5 years ago
I'm going to give it to you straight because I always do and nonus; you dont give a shit. You should shift your narrative a little to be a social commentator on society. you do it in this at times and it's when this writing is strongest. also, piece of advice. always start a story closest to the end. think about TV and movies you've seen and think about when they start. DO NOT tell the reader about the protagonist. the reader wants mystery and wants to slowly and be intrigued on who this fat kid is and what he is. You didnt do it in a way that made me cringe, you did it actually good. I couldnt tell if this is your life or fiction, which is very good. To establish your characters and buildthem, make them more comfortable---use a lot of dialgue. I think you should write a very intriguing story based where you grew up and mix in real events that are so unbelievable people wojksnt believe you if you said it was true anyway so incorporate it. Work on editing and rewrites. This seemed like a fresh rough draft. I feel through the way you talk that you are very vocal with your opinions of people and society. A lot of things pisses you off maybe. I think you can create a great dark humor novel based on a fictional characters life. First person narrative! Keep the cursing because that's the real you and the reader wants to feel a authentic and raw story. I have a feeling you're funny and sarcastic. I believe you can create and pen a coming of age novel. I'll keep my eye on you and how you write from now on whenever I get to come on here. And I think you do safe what people say, the first thing someone says who cares is I dont give a shit what you say. please care because what they have to say can really help you go from decent to amazing! good job,
launchora_imgAnonymously None
5 years ago
I feel you man ?
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