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Broken Smiles

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Tears stream down the cheeks

Of the face behind the mask

She’s feeling broken inside,

But of course no one bothers to ask


A fake smile, a forced laugh,

A face that is sweetly smiling

But why can’t you see that it’s all just fake

‘Cause behind it she’s actually crying


More tears in her eyes with every “I’m fine.”

A knife to her heart with another “It’s okay.”

Her true feelings caged within its confines

With her utmost efforts to keep them at bay


No one could see her standing in the dark

Greatly broken and all alone

Tears in her eyes with her bleeding heart

Even though on her face happiness shown


And every single day she wonders in vain

Why no one can actually see

Her tainted heart and all of the pain

That’s hidden behind fake laughter and glee


She wanted an end to this numbing depression,

To the sadness she felt deep within

To every single one of her darkest thoughts

She had finally decided to give in


So there she stood in the dimly lit room

In her hands she held a blade

On her clothes a red stain had started to bloom

As she silently took her own life


But as the darkness took over she smiled

For her heart was finally at peace

As her blood pooled around her in the dark

She had finally found her release


Some of you'd say "That isn't the answer!"

And some of you'd think she wanted attention

But she was just human and you couldn't blame her

For every mistake and small imperfection.




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launchora_imgThe P12
6 years ago
Uhm. We're all humans. So you're convincing the entire humanity to just be human and commit suicide? Or you're just persuading them to commit errors because we're only humans? We are only humans, but we need not just to be mere humans who commit mistakes and getting up the next day without even learning the lessons yesterday. Suicide has never been the answer. Depression just needs SOCIAL INTERACTION. Correct me if I am wrong, but this is the number one recommendations psychiatrists and psychologists would give.
launchora_imgFaded Letters
6 years ago
Hello! I appreciate your opinion very much but, that wasn't the goal of this poem for me. I write these and post them because I express myself in the poems I make. I have a different view on what I make and I guess other people do too, like you. There really are people out there like the girl in this poem. My work doesn't really focus on the bright side of things but I get your point. Thank you! :)
launchora_imgyin yang
6 years ago
this is beautiful
launchora_imgLaunchora User
6 years ago
I love the last stanza. And yes, these things do happen. I don't have depression but I understand how it is to hide behind a mask. Like, almost every single day.I don't bother wondering why no one sees past mine though; if I don't want them to see it, they never will.
launchora_imgRuhii Sen
6 years ago
I understand wat happens when u go through depression but overcoming depression is life not ending d beautiful life
launchora_imgLaunchora User
6 years ago
I can understand.. Depression is a bully.. But suicide is a luxury that not everyone can afford.
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