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In My Absence

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Consider delicate, consider flowers,
Consider fragile, if she cowers.
But don't let her cry,
My sweetheart, she has powers.

I am weak, and she has to stay,
She will miss, and I'll be away.
So I am giving her you,
My sweetheart, love her everyday.

Tell her lies, "He will return",
Truth is dark, it will burn.
Give her time as she grows,
My sweetheart, she will learn.

As kind as you are, broad like river,
Poor I stand, begging forever.
But don't be the God who listens to none,
My sweetheart, don't leave her, never.


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launchora_imgTia Writz
6 years ago
You have written it beautifully. ....but just one thing I wanna ask. ....that for whom is this poem dedicated? ?
launchora_imgSambit Sarkar
6 years ago
I had a friend. Her mother was going through brain cancer last stage. I was thinking what she must have felt leaving her daughter, this was their story but then I wanted a more generalized approach maybe so that others can relate too.
launchora_imgTia Writz
6 years ago
After this ....I have read it again...and I have found it more powerful and touching
Just one correction. ..typing mistake...it should be she will return. ..not he will..
launchora_imgSambit Sarkar
6 years ago
Yes but I was imagining from my perspective lol. Like if I was a father and I had a daughter.
launchora_imgTia Writz
6 years ago
Oh...sorry then....
launchora_imgSambit Sarkar
6 years ago
Oh don't be and thank you so much for taking time and reading my poem :)
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Updated on August 30, 2017

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