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His Oath for her, Her Oath for him..

All his life was in isolation until he met her. 

All her life was in freedom until she met him.

They met in a public cafe.

He was 27 and she was 25.

He asked few questions but she remain silent.

Her mother told her not to speak much in front of others so this was her first oath "To remain silent even in front of the person who could be your life partner"

He thought she was shy.

She was the free soul but not anymore, she loves to talk but not anymore.

He asked about her education and she replied. She was more educated then his whole family and now she has to deny. That's her second oath "you are educated that's fine just don't show of, your education seems nothing in comparison of your husband"

Her supposed to be       Mother-in-law asked, can she cook? She wanna say something else but all she can say is yes that's her third oath "it doesn't matter you like to cook or not its not a choice, you have to."

He was noticing her and she looked bit confused. He thought she was nervous. 

She was a teacher, she knows how to deal with people! But these are not people they are the decision maker of her future. She was not nervous she was pity on herself. 

His Grand mother asked did she pray? 

Her work was her worship and now she has to choose between worship and husband! Actually not choose she has no choice. That's her fourth oath " no matter what gives you happiness, you are born to be a wife and have no choice of life "

She said yes but her eyes says no. 

Her eyes has tears but no one notice that so.

He saw those eyes and knew something is wrong.

He hold her hand and ask her to look upon.

He ask to her if she want this?

Her eyes says no but lips were silent.

He told everyone to be quite he just want to listen the silent volcano. 

She finally speaks, she said she has no problem with him. She don't want to loose her freedom in him. She wants to work even after marriage. Her work is worship and she don't want to leave her worship for this. 

Her mother stares at her and make her quite. 

Her mother said she's just nervous everything is alright.

She will not work if you don't want that, she will be a  perfect wife I assure you of that. 

He looked at her and said Its my oath for her-

1. She will always be a free soul like she was, I want to marry her not her freedom. 

2. She can work if she likes, she can continue her worship till she likes.

3. We both will cook together sometime, I don't know cooking but I can be a assistant if she likes. 

4. She's free to take decision for her life, if we marry it will be Our life not only mine. 

5. We can always talk and share our issues, whatever they are I promise we will work on them together.

She looked at him with full respect, he gained that respect.

She said ThankYou for understanding, ThankYou for listening, ThankYou for everything.

He said be the change you want to see, I wish my sister also get the chance to be always free. 

Everyone else was quit just listening to him, they realized their mistake of forcing marriage on her and him. 

Now she can have oath of her choice and can live her life with the person of her choice. 

Now she's free she's happy.

He made the change that he wants to see. 





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launchora_imgNisha Patel
6 years ago
Oath ' the amazing writeup' good going girl...
launchora_imgSugandha Sehgal
6 years ago
Thanks :)
launchora_imgKp 95
6 years ago
Nice work buddy :D
launchora_imgSugandha Sehgal
6 years ago
Thnks buddy!!
launchora_imgMehak Raichand
6 years ago
This is really a good piece of work. I love it. Keep it up dear!
launchora_imgSugandha Sehgal
6 years ago
Thanks :)
launchora_imgSilly Sartorius
6 years ago
woww girl..he is goalsss... ♡
launchora_imgSugandha Sehgal
6 years ago
:)
launchora_imgLone Ranger
6 years ago
One of your best write ups ;) liked it :) kudos !
launchora_imgSugandha Sehgal
6 years ago
I am glad u like it :)
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