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THE FEELING OF LOVE IS SUCH.

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When the sky seems wider
And numb is the air,
It's the occurrence of feeling,
that's difficult to bear
It's when your thinking stops
And anxiety is much.
That feeling of LOVE.. Of love is such!

One dicey day when I knew,
My life had evolved,
Confusions in me..
had all been resolved.
When that stranger became..
my fantasy, my desire
I controlled my heart saying
"Just stop,you liar!"

But soon this lie turned real,
leaving behind a stun
When you finally revealed..
that "I am the one!"
How my world paused
And I flew beyond the cloud nine,
On her proposal that said
"Will you be mine?"

All so instant that I...
Once hesitated with many ifs-buts-n-ors,
But down inside I swear I screamed
"Yes,I'm all yours!"
Oh my god! Life suddenly...
Turned from grey to bright,
Guess I had overcome..
The ultimate hunt of my Miss Right

This confession of her..
Was like a dream come true,
And of those silent sensations
I had newly been through!

You know my body tickles
With only a thought of your name,
"Love transforms you" is so true
(I too am no more the same!)
Now I smile alone,
Even without any reason
I guess its a steady indication
Of our romantic season!

I now dress up nicely
To look better than before,
She isn't here..
yet I keep standing by the door.
Her presence is alarming
N fresh is her smell,
God knows what makes me now..
keep on checking my cell!

This is my condition all day..
when you aren't around,
Awaited remains the night..
with you to spellbound
As soon as that minute comes,
n I get the chance,
I statue the world..
N go gaping in her trance!

All my veins shuffle
N blood flows in noise,
Perhaps the reaction on me 
Of her magical voice!
More often she says..
"See my prince in your mirror"
But it's as long as I'm with you
My dear, my owner, my emperor

I still try to believe if it's me..
who's so loved by you,
Hung in the air is distance,
Yet how close are you.
It's actually now when...
I try to imagine you in disguise,
Wish to see you immediately,
To get stuck in your eyes

But you claim that..
It's the whole effect of "My eye-lock"
That brings us nearer...
And our arms block.
In that split-second i wish to go..
Totally blind n deaf n dumb,
"Let silence do all the talking..
And we remain numb."

Everytime you whispered..
In my ears that slight,
Makes me go crazier..
For you in ultradelight!
The talks aren't over..
Then why has shrunken the night,
Had you been infront,
I would have really hugged you tight!

If it's a dream,I deny to revive
For heaven's sake!
To fall in love with you..
Had been my life's "cutest mistake"
That last "i love you"...
Before ending the call..
Works on me like that echo,
...in an empty hall.

You know you stole my heart
Much smartly than how hackers hack,
First made me your lover,
Then addict n now an insomniac!!
Holy God! Can someone tell me how!!
How to resist loving her to feel n to fall!
Those beautiful moments with you..
a several times I recall!

So inevitably when i get surrendered,
On her smile..say...and touch,
How I actually discover then...
The beautiful feeling of love...of LOVE is such.


30 Launchers recommend this story
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Its so good like i have no words❤
launchora_imgBroken Soul
3 years ago
Thank you yaar ❤❤❤
launchora_imgAditi Srivastava
3 years ago
Simply wow!
launchora_imgBroken Soul
3 years ago
Thank you ❤
launchora_imgBhanu srinija
4 years ago
Really it's very beautiful ??
launchora_imgBroken Soul
3 years ago
Thank you ❤?
launchora_imgLaunchora User
4 years ago
Hello i am mis brenda i have private disscusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
I was just so lost in it dada?? u always rock the stage so hard!!!!! keep inking like this yaar!❤
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Thank you Srishti ? ❤ You know my this poem and its first part "MY LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT" was published in Singapore magazine. Now I'm working on its third part
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
Oh myy!!!! that's so wonderful!!!❤ mtlb our engineer Dada is a very popular writer as well!!!❤
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
P.S. hopefully the 3rd part will get as much appreciation ❤
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Hahaha not popular that time I was in Singapore so it got published my friends submitted in some portal and it got selected ? ?
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Yeah after love at first sight, feeling of love, third part will be on breakup, heartbreak.
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
haayyy!!! itni jaldi dil tot bhi gya?
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Yeah 3 stages of love- Attraction, feeling of being in love and Heartbreak
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
but not all the tym, maybe
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Hmm but its based on my story ? so heartbreak ?
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
aayyy haayyy!!!! koi nhi hum h naa!❤ I'm a nice sisso❤?
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Ya that you're ? thank you for being such a nice sister ❤?
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
that's coz ur a great bro tooooo?❤
launchora_imgBroken Soul
4 years ago
Thank you ? ❤
launchora_imgSrishti Bagh
4 years ago
ur wlcm dadazz❤❤❤
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