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An Ultimate Revange

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The story begins with a planet which is far away from earth and looks same like earth. Only difference was that that their science was more developed than earth.

on that planet there lived two best friends –makra and mesh. They were connected to each other in every possible way. Both were finest warrior of that planet. Both of them possessed natural power. Makra was kind and generous and mesh was blind in power.

once there held a competition that who is more powerful between them. Makra refused to fight but mesh somehow made him ready to fight because he wanted to prove that he is powerful than other. There held a friendly fight and makra won.

mesh developed anger and hatredness towards him.

after some period of time king of that planet announced the makra to be the next king.

with this announcement the mesh killed king and attacked makra.

makra was helpless as mesh was head of military power.

makra fought mesh and during fight both of them went near spaceship. Makra climbed on spaceship by ctting mesh’s one hand a eye.

makra came to earth and was injured he went to one of farmers barn and slept.

when he woke up a man was helping him and brought him to his eyes. Makra said whole story to him and lived there for some time and went to city to live normal and started to earn.

he fell in love and married a woman.

after some period of time they had a child who was a boy.

Both of them was very happy. Makra informed his old friend farmer. They kept the name of the boy as karthika. Time goes on and makra knew that mesh will come for his revenge so he already had planned to how to save his son. Karthika became 3. on that day they were celebrating his birthday and suddenly there came mesh.

he looked angry and dangerous. He had his hand made with metal and also his eye. He also had scars on his other hand and on nose.

Chapter Two

A fight started between makra and mesh. Makra’s wife knew nothing. Makra said to her to take karthika downstairs and showed a path to tunnel which he had created to save his son a long back ago. As she kept karthika in tunnel a soldier killed her and tried to kill karthika also but he was long gone. Makra was without any weapon and soon mesh killed him. After killing him he bombed the house and launged by saying that he has killed everyone one related to makra. A soldier came forward and said that his son was safely sent away. Mesh tried to find him, he went through tunnel till last point but cannot find him. Makra has created a small aircraft at the end of tunnel which took him to his old friend farmer. Mesh was unaware of that fact. Now karthika was under farmers guidance. As he grew older he became aware of some powers which he has inherited from his father. He went to a nearby hill and started checking his power. He disructed the hill as much as he could. Everyone wondered that who has done this. Farmer came to know that this work is done by karthika and he said him and tried to make him understand that he should keep his power secret. Karthika refused to keep secret and asked him that how he got powers. Farmer did not answer so karthika ran away. As the news became big a soldier of mesh informed him about the incident. Mesh knew that this is karthika and came to that place. He went to farmer and asked to tell about karthika. Farmer refused so mesh tried to kill him. Farmer was badly injured and mesh thought that he has died and searched whole village but cannot find karthika. Mesh go away and karthika came to home and saw farmer injured. He asked who has done with anger and was going after them and farmer stopped him and said everything he had known about him and died. Karthika was alone and angry he found mesh and tried to attack but soldier caught him as he was skillless. Karthika flew away soldier were in pursuit and there was a fatal fight in air. Karthika was injured and teleported himself to somewhere. He became unconciousness as he woke up he was in a temple in china between hills. The view was gigantic and supreme.

Chapter Three

The monk of that temple taught karthika to control his anger and power and also taught him kung fu, sword and archery. Karthika learnt very fastly and became warrior- a deadly warrior.

karthika was able to control- fire, water, air and sand.

karthika came back to native place and started to take mesh down. Mesh was planning something big to destroy whole earth.

karthika killed many of his soldier and hides. He fell in love. But left her because he don’t wanted to keep her in danger. He lived there in disguise of a military officer and was waiting for mesh’s return. He fought some battles. He killed all of mesh’s soldier and started to kill every gang in the city. During fight he wore some kind of costume to keep identity secret as every superhero does.

he himself has designed the costume.

he waited for mesh return and till that time he went to some country to fight terrorism. Terrorist killed every one his soldier an captured him. They used a gas to make him unconciosness and took him to their camp. When he woke up he saw an ongoing military robots and ships. Mesh gave them their technology to destroy earth. Karthika used his powers to destroy every ship and robots which they were making. A deadly fight which karthika alone fought.

when mesh got news that karthika has destroyed his ships and robots he came to earth. He went to his house and started a fight. Karthika was able to fight mesh effectively. Between fights they went to someplace away from city as karthika was killing him mesh’s soldier captured he lover and forced karthika to lose.

mesh injured karthika badly. While injuring he killed her lover and with anger karthika killed mesh with a fight.

karthika went to her and took her to hospital. They transplanted some organs and made her live alive with condition that she will live only for short period. Karthika took her to far away place and lived. In that time she made karthika to make a promise that after her death he will not do any destruction in anger and depression and will live without her. Karthika promised her and after some days she died. Karthika was very depressed and left that place and went to unknown forest mountain place and lived there by cutting and selling trees. Everytime he was angry he destructed mountain and forest. He lived like a mad without anyone’s presence.

he lived alone in vast forest in nature.……….

                                                                        ( The End )  


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