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Save me, save me from this cruel society. 

Save me, save me from all these dark thinking.

Save me, save me because I'm drowning. 

And I never learned how to swim. 


Save me, save me from vast disappointments.

Save me, save me from my own self.

Save me, save me because I'm breaking. 

And I never learned how to mend broken things.


Save me.


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launchora_imgLaunchora User
5 years ago
amazing Morento...????
launchora_imgRita Aboukaram
5 years ago
i feel u gurl❤️
launchora_imgCoffee Stains
5 years ago
We all need saving at some point or so we think. I mean, that feeling must be so wonderful right, if there is always someone who could dive in the void we've created. But then we need to learn how to swim, because these people wont always be there for us.
launchora_imgVon Morente
5 years ago
The feeling of needing someone to survive isn't wonderful. It is excruciating, being so helpless that all you can do is rely on other people. Sure, one can always help herself/himself stand, but there are times you just can't. Well, not alone.
launchora_imgCoffee Stains
5 years ago
I was being sarcastic ? I know the feeling all too well. I know that I am my only savior when the sun finally sets. Point is, hang in there as much as you can, it would be too much to ask you to survive kaya ayun keep on hanging on... with all your will.?
launchora_imgVon Morente
5 years ago
Sorryyyyyyyyy, i didn't get the sarcasm part, ahahahahahaha. And thank you. Really.
launchora_imgCoffee Stains
5 years ago
Haha it's fiine. It's difficult to find sarcasm when a person isn't talking to you directly?.
launchora_imgVon Morente
5 years ago
let's talk personally then. char hahahaahahahahah
launchora_imgCoffee Stains
5 years ago
Hahaha I stutter in person. Di ka matutuwa ?
launchora_imgVishal Shetty
5 years ago
beautiful poem
launchora_imgVon Morente
5 years ago
Thank you :)
launchora_imgVishal Shetty
5 years ago
welcome
launchora_imgAnkita Paul
5 years ago
Good one? keep writing ?
launchora_imgVon Morente
5 years ago
Thank you for reading, really hoping i still can :)
launchora_imgAnkita Paul
5 years ago
Always
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