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i remember the first time we met.

our little encounters on the table set.

taking pictures together,

though we have never talked to each other.


we looked good, i may say.

we looked close but not in that way.

you seem to grow fond of me

and i do to, i don't know if this'll fade.


but you looked at me like stars in the night,

full of wonders and somehow things felt right,

and i looked at you in a different way

i tried to do the same but i just don't sway.


so i keep you because i'd like to,

see you smile not just because your lips can do,

but to see your shouting heart radiate

in your eyes and i'll wait.


unknowingly and unexpectedly,

i feel like you're taming me.

but i'll reverse this game.

to make you feel the same.



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