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"once upon a time there was a traveller who used to travel a lot in search of a mysterious thing his heart desired but the unfortunately he didn't know what it was  so he went city to city , village to village in search of it .Once he came to a desert settlement and was quite parched .After days he couldn't find water at all so he collapsed but before he lost his consciousness a girl who saw her rushed to his help . When he opened his eyes after an hour he was in a grassland and saw a very beautiful face of a girl with ruby eyes and snow coloured skin .She asked him how he was feeling now and he said okay .
Strangely his heart which always used to feel incomplete and confused had started to settle magically . He smiled and asked her name to which she replied
"Dream ..I m a dream baby ...just your dream ". His face gasped in horror as her face dissolved with the wind and he saw himself lying alone yet again in the sand . It was a mirage .
The thing he wanted the most like sand has slipped away from his hand .
He picked himself up ,dusted the sand and drifted away into the infinite desert .


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launchora_imgMamoru Mamo
6 years ago
It has a great plot and a pretty neat ending. Great piece! :)
launchora_imgAnimesh Sharma
6 years ago
thanks a lot !!!

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