launchora_img

Illustration by @luciesalgado

Last Goodbye

Info

                    A full moon and cold breeze of air, when Anisha was outraged by a bad dream.

                      Anisha could not sleep because of that dream.

She decided to leave her room and watched tv in the living room.

                       While she was watching, there was a peeping behind the door.

Anisha ignore it, she thinks that she just only have an returned eyes and she continue watching.

                       At the same time it peeked again and anisha noticed it.

Anisha's feather rise and felt frightened. But she dared to look at it.

                        She slowly walk to the door with the trembling knees and sweating cold.

                          When Anisha slowly open the door, a voice came behind the door and said; Anishaaaaaa!!!

                        Anisha was so scared, she ran into her room and covered herself a blanket.

                          When Anisha felt peaceful she remove the blanket and try to go out again to see it.

                         She walked out of her bedroom and slowly stepped up the living room to look it.

                           Anisha had the courage to see it again, she slowly open the door, a wild lady ghost smiling on her.

                     Shook eye, hardened knees and cold sweat flowing on her face.

She shout and shout, but there's no voice coming out on her mouth.

                 Anisha was so frightened that she was fainting and drowning in the morning in the living room that night.

                      Dawn to dawn when her mother woke up. She go to Anisha's room to wake her up,  but she saw she's not there and she decide to stepped up in the living room to see if she's there.

                  She was shock when she saw Anisha sleeping beside the door.

Wake up!!! Wake up my child; she said.

                A grew eyes and shivering when she was awake.

A tender of hug and she scream thank you Lord I past that nightmare.

                 Nightmare? ; Her mother ask.Yes mom; Anisha said and tell what happen in that night.

                     Half minutes before lunch, when her auntie call her to tell that Liana her best friend cousin who has heart disease was already die.

                          Anisha was winks and tears fall. When she was pondering she thought that the lady ghost she saw last night is her best friend who try to say goodbye.

                           Anisha wept and cried and could not do anything but to accept that she was dead.


                                            The end.....


1 Launcher recommend this story
launchora_img
launchora_imgKit Nadado
6 years ago
Great story. I know you have it in you, Dolores. Keep it up. To improve, I suggest you run this through grammar check. Also, give us more details about the ghost. Make the ghost somewhat relative to the cousin. Maybe the ghost is wearing something that the cousin wears a lot. Give the ghost something that will give Anisha a clue that it was her cousin after all.
launchora_imgDavid Dolores
6 years ago
ok sir.. thank you po.. ??
More stories by David
Girl In The Mirror

Keep on going...

00
Kiss Under the Rain

Kiss under the rain..

00
"My Superwoman"

I love you mom. You are my everything. I am not shy to shout to the world how bless I am to have you

66

Stay connected to your stories

Last Goodbye

73 Launches

Part of the Mystery collection

Updated on June 30, 2017

Recommended By

(1)

    WHAT'S THIS STORY ABOUT?

    Characters left :

    Category

    • Life
      Love
      Poetry
      Happenings
      Mystery
      MyPlotTwist
      Culture
      Art
      Politics
      Letters To Juliet
      Society
      Universe
      Self-Help
      Modern Romance
      Fantasy
      Humor
      Something Else
      Adventure
      Commentary
      Confessions
      Crime
      Dark Fantasy
      Dear Diary
      Dear Mom
      Dreams
      Episodic/Serial
      Fan Fiction
      Flash Fiction
      Ideas
      Musings
      Parenting
      Play
      Screenplay
      Self-biography
      Songwriting
      Spirituality
      Travelogue
      Young Adult
      Science Fiction
      Children's Story
      Sci-Fantasy
      Poetry Wars
      Sponsored
      Horror
    Cancel

    You can edit published STORIES

    Language

    Delete Opinion

    Delete Reply

    Report Content


    Are you sure you want to report this content?



    Report Content


    This content has been reported as inappropriate. Our team will look into it ASAP. Thank You!



    By signing up you agree to Launchora's Terms & Policies.

    By signing up you agree to Launchora's Terms & Policies.