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The haunted house is But not to Be seen Like

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It is said that which  we give is that we get. Let's see what happens next.

One day there were some children playing cricket beside the haunted house. One of them bet the ball into the house . Varun went into the house to bring the ball. Then he was scared and came out. He asked his friends to come with him . Then they went on to bring the ball . Then they saw a man acting as ghost . His name was venu and he said that there was really ghost in that  house. They didn't believe him in this case. When they were going out from the house Varun stopped suddenly. All were asking what happened to him . Then he said ,"I am not Varun I am Abhi the devil." Then they enquired about him and who killed him. And helped him to seek his revenge . But it is not the end


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Umm you have put a nice effort. You can do better.the story was a bit vague. In order to grab peoples interest, you should have probably explained things more like how the house looked, what did varun saw that creeped him out and stuffs like. There are some errors present which you can correct. All the best and keep writing. Happy Launching❤︎
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Updated on February 09, 2019

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