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THE HEAVY SOUL

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It is never about what we look
everything falls at how we try to hook.

Many thoughts always rushed in my head
but, just remained to be goodnight stories while i was going to bed.

The brutal facts I heared for long helped to create my opinions' tale
heart was moulded to be rituals bed with emotions never valued in the society's sale.

Accepting it was feasible but my expectations denied 
my thoughts were dipped & drowned but hopes never died.

Silence had stories of the mist's snow
darker the shade deeper I wanted to know.

Truths were hidden & never freed from dark,
it drove me crazy when people never wanted to understand the mark.

My dreams wanted to fly & grab the flow
but,it pushed me back and their grumbling began to grow.

They smashed my body & burnt it to coal,
Yet my desires breathe as I have a untouched Heavy soul!!!



5 Launchers recommend this story
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launchora_imgLaunchora User
6 years ago
I am so happy that you let me read this..... Very good ?
launchora_imgSwega Nalawade
6 years ago
thank you the pleasure is mine
launchora_imgTia Writz
6 years ago
Very very very very...well done...keep writing

Plz have a look at my works too
launchora_imgShakti Tulshyan
6 years ago
what this app called this.. Story or what we call poem is appreciatable !! it's nice to read all that. Frankly speaking.. after reading this.. is like.. speechless !! the second paragraph.. I mean second stanza, " many thoughts.. going to bed". this stanza made me speechless !! it's feel like every youth now a days is going through this. And even the last third stanza.. second line.. it's very true for me ! it always drive me crazy when people never try to understand what I want to mark. they also understand what they wanted to..! . I appreciate your writing !!
launchora_imgShakti Tulshyan
6 years ago
I mean.. they only understand what they wanted to..!!
launchora_imgSwega Nalawade
6 years ago
thanks alot
launchora_imgShakti Tulshyan
6 years ago
Welcome Swega
launchora_imgShakti Tulshyan
6 years ago
appreciate your talent !!
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