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The Mystery Room

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A happy family decided to live on a abandoned house.A house that full of mystery.And there is a room that if their is someone will enter the room.
THEY WILL DIE.
That family has a only daughter named Gail.
Gail was so very excited because it is her first time that they vacation on that kind of place .Bighouse , quiet place and they don't have any neighbors there .

Gail fixed her things and go to her temporary room .
She feel something wrong .That make her goosebumps.
She heard a voice of a girl that is crying then laughing .
"HHUHUHUHUHHU!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!
It is very loud voice .
Gail: OOOWWWW!!!! MY GOSH whose voice is that .?
Gail can't explain whose voice is that from .She try to calm her self and thinks that it is just only a hallucinations.



After she fixed her things she decided to go out on her room and explore the whole house.It is very quiet place , it can relaxed her body .but in the evening it is a nightmare .
8 pm in the evening gail and her family decided to eat their dinner .
They are very happy while they are eating .
Gail tell to her mom and dad what she feel on her room.But her family ignore her and they think that gail was joking only .
After they eat .Gail decided to back on her room .

For the second time gail enter her room. Midnight a violent storm of rain came on , and the wind was so high that all the windows and doors in the old house shook and shatter .Gail can't sleep , she was very scared .She's crying but no one will hear her .She saw a girl standing in the corner of her room .Wondering whether that it just only a shadow in the corner of her room .But she's wrong it is true .She heard a footstep towards her.
"TTSSSIIKKKK TTTSSSIIKKK TTSSIIILKKK ."
Gail go to the door , she try to open it but she can't .
Gail don't know what she need to do to go out on her room.
Gail was very very scared .
"AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE"
Gail jump on the window then SHE DIED .After that , the ghost will disappear
And no one will saw it anymore


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launchora_imgKit Nadado
6 years ago
Wow! That ending was unexpected. I like the premise of this story. The suicide ending was morbid but it added to the effect. I suggest that you focus on showing using the five senses more than telling. Don't tell us she's afraid. Show us what she feels. Good luck!
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