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The Other Guy

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She came to life and asked your hands
Like a chance from you to be your maiden
You told her that it cannot work
But she forced you to trust her feelings..
She saw your aura not your roots..
And went on with a thousand goofs
Of she is this and she is that...
And made you realise that she is mad..
In your love and in your ways
Truly madly and deeply is all she says
She gives you hope and makes you fight
Your inner force to fall over a night
For her intimidating talks and earthly wants
You then fall inside her fairy lawns
The picture perfect life the fascinating hopes
Of a life like a purple robe
A velvet smooth a cottony soft...
The life you always dreamt of...
And then you start making her your own
And treat her like a princess sworn
To a prince like you though a ragged one
But still you break the stars and moon and come...
For you want her to be happy
Cause for you life has started to make sense..
You make out with her you stand for her
You leave her safely in the pouring rain
Without thinking much of you..
And you do what all you can really do..
It was life a lovely life..
You and your girl and the precious moments in time...
She loves you a lot..
You love her a lot..
And you both didn't care
Of world and folks and what they hear
About you and her cause you both was strong
And you started seeing your sweetheart as the better half for lifelong..
But... Soon...over darkness took
It started shaking you over from your root..
The girl you loved changed her mind..
She left you saying its not her time...
For a lifelong commitment cause she doesn't want it..
She wants her career to be out of reach..
That our dreams we saw and thoughts we drew..
She says there cannot be "we" from I and you..
Your hopes get shattered your love gets broken...
How on earth can this may take...
Place you ponder and your thoughts never stop..
You think what she did to you was breaking you up..
Yeah she was the girl who asked your love ...
And now there is saying turning up..
You see not always a boy is to be blamed.
And you say her that she is just a shame
Who is the cause of your death of innocence
The death of being true and loyal the death of heart...
Then she leaves cause she don't have an answer..
And still you see dear heart you still ponder..
Of her thoughts of our wonders..
Can't you see she was just a liar..
Move on heart you had enough...
Now you know how to be strong..
This story here teaches a lesson of life...
That all the girls are not always right..
Of what she did with the other guy..
When she left her without a try..
She killed his love for just a infatuation..
He is now a man without intimidation...
This how a lover died..
That night when she took a goodbye..


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launchora_imgTia Writz
5 years ago
So many heartbreak stories on launchora but u know what is the beauty in them..they are the organised and complete artworks of a heart that was shattered to pieces ...pieces which were strewn in a dark space...of an incomplete soul...
Well done....good flow..keep writing?
launchora_imgTia Writz
5 years ago
Would love to receive your feedbacks on my other works too
launchora_imgRohit Chowdhury
5 years ago
no problems... you're flawless too.. a good poetess I have seen in here.. keep the work up I'll surely keep going with your works..
launchora_imgTia Writz
5 years ago
Thanks dear..?
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Updated on March 17, 2018

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