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The Shadow

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                     Jasmine saw her boyfriend Johny with some girl in the park, they look happy and full of love. Then her heart filled with jealousy and anger. she hold her hand so tight to stop her angerness. The bulb in her mind shine.She planned to have a revenge to her boyfriend because he had an affair with someone.

                   

                     The same night Johny was walking to a dark street,then he felt that someone was following him. Then suddenly Jasmine came up and stabbed Johny's back. The eyes of Johny was grew wide when he saw that Jasmine was the one who killed him. Before he close  her eyes, her shirt was wet  and his eyes was so lonely.

                   

                      After that Jasmine go to her bed and  got to go to sleep. A minute later, she hears footsteps outside his door and peeks out of her eyes to see what is happening.

                    Then after hat her dress was flooded with icy sweat. Her pillow lay in the corner of her roo and Jasmine's blanket was slowly descending  off of be. He saw  man standing in front of him. It is her boyfriend Johny that sorrounded by a white shadow. 

                 

                   She don't know what to do her feet and hands are remained straight, she cannot talk or more. Her boyfriend Johny wass coming near her. Looing at her with a scary look with a reddish  eyes an scary smile.

               

                    She can't move. She wantto shout but she can't. "Leave me! Get lost," she shouted but Johny did not obey her. "ssshhhhh....." Johny whispered. "Help me!" Jasmine's shouted. "Don"t shout because no one can hear you," Johny laughed. "Your jealousy will kill you!,"he added. 

                Then after saying those lines, Johny left Jasmine bathing alone with  her own blood. Johny just did what Jasmine did to him.


               You made the way to kill yourself!

               


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launchora_imgKit Nadado
6 years ago
Nice story. Pretty cool pace and casual storytelling. I would suggest running this through grammar check for polishing. Also, add more imagery and metaphors. Good luck!
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Updated on June 30, 2017

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