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Unknown Woman

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Sunday morning, I decided to go park while riding my baby car to meet my annoying boyfriend. "Sh*t, it's    already time but he does'nt yet here!" I loose my patient the sun so hot, it can cook egg by the roof, but still he does'nt here yet. "Bruuum" he stopped outside of his car, and he go near where I am. "You're too early to my next appointment." (Sarcasm) "Waaahh!" Suddenly my body pained. "What's on to you? Did you noticed that we're talking to each other? Are you blind? Tsssss!" she says "I'm sorry, I'm very sorry." "Your sorry is not workable." And then Brayle took my hand and take me some where. Suddenly my hand get's hurt, a knife cutting deeper in my hand.

     One night, I'm busy watching a telenovela tittled Encantadia, then suddenly my shoulder lights. A wash in rush to go to the front of the mirror to see what's happening to me. I go out side to drink some water, "Waaahhh!" A girl who wears long white dress with very long hair, I can't see her face because of her hair. My tears suddenly fall. "Yayey! a ghost..." Someone knock the door. I slowly open the door the girl lost. I touch the doorknob to open it. When I open it I saw Brayle and I slowly hug him and I sobbe. "Ohhh! Baby I'm scared."

      When I woke up I observed the surrounding my boyfriend is not here. "Kruaahh... kruaahh..." I heard something and sudden my feeling they become a different. My bristle my rising and I feel like my head grows. I slowly close my eyes and when I open it I saw again the girl in the front of the door . "Who you are? What do you want to me?" "I'm the girl... who... stricken you in the park..." "I don't know you!" She said on me she is the girl in the park. I dont remember something about her.

       Months after, my mother's died, hitted by a car. Next, I was about to die when somone's stole  my bag and I almost hitted too. Everything is a cursed. "Gosh what's happening to me?!" Then one day someone sent me a letter. And the letter  is the answer what I need to find out and know. I was frighten when I found out what's  all behind of this. She secretly inlove my boyfriend  and she hate's me a lot. When she foud out that I'm the woman of troy, she get depressed and she always asking herself "I am ugl? Why he does'nt like me back?!" She ended her life by hangging her self. She is the women I went in the park.


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launchora_imgKit Nadado
6 years ago
Wow, Interesting ghost story. The ghost was not violent at all. I think the protagonist is more ghastly than the ghost. Anyways, I recommend you run this through grammar check for polishing. Also, write more details as to how this ghost died and now is haunting the protagonist. Good luck!
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