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A Broken Promise

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I promise I won't forget,

I promise I will be there for you,

I promise I will never hurt you, and will never leave you,

I promise to love and wait for you.


All those promises were made because I do,

I do Love and dream to be with you,

To be the knight that will protect you,

To be the person that will build our dreams together.


Yet, I broke that promise.

How can I fix a broken glass?...

How can I fix a broken heart?...

For I have sinned by tearing your trust and faith in me?...

No matter what I do, I am lost because I have hurt you...


The guilt is killing me inside,

For it longs for your forgiveness,

But I know I need to suffer this,

For this is the remission of my sins...


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launchora_imgChoco Shake
3 years ago
The story beneath the poem is clear and easy to understand, and it's great. I think it would be better if you pick metaphors and words that possess more emotions.
launchora_imgJho Otrebor
3 years ago
You will heal, it just takes time. Forgive yourself, and the next time you fall in love be sure that you never make the same mistake again.
launchora_imgAmiable !
3 years ago
heart touching ? checkout my latest works too if possible!
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Updated on March 30, 2021

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