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I want you to know,
The pain you left me with,
A candle half unburnt half lit!

You loved me?
No, you didn't boy!
For you I was always a toy!

I loved you?
Yes, ofcourse I did,
But you left me in the mid!

I want you to know,
I still feel you sometime,
Deep down in my heart's mine! 

You have a special place,
In my heart well,
Lost heaven new hell!

You know what?
If I was a ring,
You were my gem!

I want you to know,
I won't love you again,
All my loss and zero gain!

Together I thought we could make
Something beautiful,
But now I just think it would be awful!

I hate myself,
Not because of you!
But because I thought we will make a wonderful world, yes, we two!

I want you to know,
The pain you left me with,
A candle half unburnt half lit!

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First poem here!!
Do text your opinions!!
Lots of love
-Amisha!


9 Launchers recommend this story
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launchora_imgShubhangi .
5 years ago
Wow,This is really painful,yet beautiful!! Loved it!
launchora_imgDivya Tiwari
5 years ago
oh god!! it's truely love❤
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
Thankyou!!
launchora_imgDivya Tiwari
5 years ago
?❤
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
✌❤
launchora_imgLaunchora User
5 years ago
wow Amisha ...it's wonderful...?????????
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
Thanks ✌❤ ??
launchora_imgLaunchora User
5 years ago
the pleasure is always mine ??????
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
❤❤✌✌
Written well considering it's your first poem.. but I would say that you need to maintain the uniformity in the stanzas. It would make your poem more adorable .
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
I will keep that in mind! thanks ✌
launchora_imgWord Burst
5 years ago
Wow, That was superb... Amazing yaar. Painful feelings.. but nicely portrayed..???
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
Thank you so much!! and have a question for you, what is your nickname? ?
should i take the pleasure!!?
launchora_imgWord Burst
5 years ago
Yes go ahead Aditya, ab bacha hi kya hai chhupane ke liye, Mera asli naam to kam hi dikhta hai launchora me ??
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
? koi bhi Bata do!
launchora_imgWord Burst
5 years ago
?. Waise yaha mujhe sab golu bulaate hai ???
launchora_imgWord Burst
5 years ago
golu ke aage sir lagaate , golu sir... Jaise chidha bhi liya aur respect bhi kar di, to hisaab barabar???
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
? sahi hai Golu sir!!
launchora_imgWord Burst
5 years ago
???
launchora_imgAmisha Sharma
5 years ago
?✌
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