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Late night in the beach

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After many years ago Andy And Alice was engaged. The day was the wedding day.  Andy waiting for her bride, he recieve a text message that alice sent to the hospital because of the car accident.
Andy was so shocked about that news, and he was going to be crazy but he didnt know what to do. But alice was died shes not recover on the car accident.
Past 4years ago andy and there friends theyre decide to out and relax. There packed all our luggage into my friends car and set off on our trip.
Since, we didnt know much about the beaches in the area, we started asking the locals one beach in particular caught our attention. The evening was so wonderful because of the sand was black and the water was glittering in the moonlight. We built a small fire in the sand and sat around, eating some snacks and drinking soda.
As we were walking along the water we heard some strange noises coming from the water. At first we thought it must be some kind of animal, but as we listened, the noise is coming from the water. In the dim light, i could barely make it out, but it appeared to be a womans head, floating above the surface.
We were creaped out by this time, so they returned to the car and decided to go to sleep. My friend and i slept beside the fire. Around 4Am we were awoken up by loud and screams and cries for help "Help me! Please help!" Andy Said.
Past few hours, Andy talked about the lady in water, He said he had woken up and needed to go to the toilet so he went down to the beach and started peeing into the water. But andy see the lady was crying and her wedding dress..
Andy remember Alice, Because that night is theyre wedding day and wedding anniversarry.


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launchora_imgKit Nadado
6 years ago
Nice storytelling! I like the urban legend feel of this story. I suggest you add more details and imagery to enhance this story. Good luck!
launchora_imgMhariel Luviano
6 years ago
Awww. This is so sad I'm slightly going to cry. On the other hand, this is so scary tragic story :(
Really? Thankyou.
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