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In this fantasy I know that's only temporary,

I can see you dazzling and shining for me

The smiles you give, it's so sweet

Do you know, they always sweep me off of my feet?

Don't hold back and embrace me with your warmth

Even if I'm aware after this, it will haunt

The sweet voice from your lips will linger

Those words of melody that lulls me, I'll always remember

I'll swim in this pool of your love

Yes, at some point I have to resurface above

In the limited time, let me love in this blindness

So I ask you, kill me with your kindness

Kill me with your passion, your mind thinking deeply

Kill me with your all, your sincerity

They ask me, "why waste time with somebody

Who will leave you at the end of this story?"

They didn't know how many times this question

I've asked myself, maybe a million

But I always end in one conclusion

I love you. It's the truth, there's no need for confusion.

No turning back, I won't regret

This numbered times, I won't forget

So before the clock stops ticking

I'll risk the now, no need for thinking

Savor the seconds of this brief kind of happy

Because I know in the end, it's all just temporary


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launchora_imgHolly Felis
5 years ago
Great consitency, superbb. But what did you mean by "sweep me off my feet"? Also if it's the truth with no 'confusion', you wouldn't have to ask yourself a million times for the reason why, right? It's contradicting.
launchora_imgMieulle Frey
5 years ago
Well, about the line of "truth with no confusion" and why I still ask myself the same question they ask me, there are just times one can't help but wonder, but still in the end you get the answer without any other explanation. I ask myself not because I'm confused, you know the times where you just internally doubt yourself only to realize the clear answer. And one thing, I'm a little bit forgetful, so maybe that's why I've asked myself a million times about it. I'm sorry I wasn't able to express that well, but I do thank you for pointing that out. I may have to revise it to make it clearer. :) As for the line, "sweep me off of my feet", I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to ask me about this but I was simply expressing how I am charmed.
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