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Not Even Close

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“Say something nice about me”

she whispered softly


You look tired,

Your eyes are weary,

Skinned knees and broken bones

A body not even your soul could call home


“That’s not nice, not even close” she cried


But don’t you see?

Even after the heavy down pour

you are still here, lying next to me

not even a second close from leaving


Honey, that's not just nice,

It’s breathtakingly beautiful,

If you’d ask me


-Artwork by: JC Dimaano


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launchora_imgFaith Shanice
6 years ago
is this your poem
launchora_imgEya Siña
6 years ago
Yep. Why do you ask?
launchora_imgFaith Shanice
6 years ago
I thought it was JC dimaano's
launchora_imgEya Siña
6 years ago
ohh. Jc was the artist who made the artwork for this poem. -A brilliant artist who's a close friend of mine.
launchora_imgFaith Shanice
6 years ago
oh is that it
launchora_imgAnusurya Sharma
6 years ago
This is just.... beautiful :')
launchora_imgEya Siña
6 years ago
Thank you!
launchora_imgShawn Caimoso
7 years ago
I read it for over 10 times now. I just love it so much! So nice.
launchora_imgEya Siña
7 years ago
Oh me oh my, thank you very much :D
launchora_imgOld Sparrow
7 years ago
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!! GOOD JOB. can't explain the feeling hahahahahaha
launchora_imgEya Siña
7 years ago
Thank you very much :D I'm glad this poem brought something out of you
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