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The Dreadful Road

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Heroine and her friends are planning to go on a road trip in Saturday night for celebrating their five years of friendship. They plan it for a long time ago.

She is walking to the street while listening a music.  BUT! Something caught in her eyes,It's faded, it's just like a human figure, It looks like a guy. He's standing in the dark electrical pole that has no light but she could see him.She blink her eyes and trying to look again from what she saw but she didn't saw him again.She could not tell if what she was seeing was real or if it just was a hallucination.

"I'm just tired,I only need to rest " Hermoine said to herself.

[Saturday]

They are all done to prepare all the stuff that they will bring in their road trip party.

“It’s 6:00 pm, come on guys lets go!” Jackson said while shout to call them. They all came out at the house of heroine and enter to the van.

Alliah asked them if she could play a music to be more enjoyable their party, and they said yes!. When the song started they all sing-alongs.

In the middle of the party, the van suddenly stops in a very, very dark road. There is no house, there is no light and there is a lot of trees. The only light that they have is the light from the van.

Jackson goes outside and he tried to check what is wrong in the van. He saw the wheel is flat because of the sharp thing that it hit in their wheels. He shook his head and he didn’t saw anything. When he opened the door van, someone grabs his hand and split his neck. Alliah, Liza D., Kian, and Heroine are shocked and they scream in fear. They go outside and try to escape but the guy was so fast.He captured Liza D. and Alliah and He stabs Aliah in the head and He stabs Liza D. in the heart.

Kian and Heroine are still running, they screaming for help but no one could not hear them.

The man shouted their name of Heroine and Kian.They confused because the man knows them.

They heard the man shouted their names. In afraid to get them, they separated their ways.

The man caught Kian.

Kian shouted saying that “ Heroine you have to escape I will try to stop him , run faster to not he get you. Don’t be guilty because you left us. I love you, Goodbye”

While Heroine trying to escape to the guy, the man showed up and heroine is shocked.

She knows the Man, she knows that face. He reveals himself, he is Christian who obsessed to her but he will angry and do a revenge because she didn’t love him back.

He breaks the legs of heroine and he hit her back using the baseball bat. There’s a lot of blood coming from her body, then she suddenly suffered in pain and that is the cause of her death.

THE END.   


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launchora_imgKit Nadado
6 years ago
Great story telling. Nice suspense building as well. I suggest you add more imagery to this story. I wanted to learn more about Christian. Maybe include Christian in their conversations or something.
launchora_imgMary Ann Alde
6 years ago
Christian didn't love Heroine. It's not love it is called obsession.
launchora_imgMhariel Luviano
6 years ago
Christian's love is not love. Mere too don't know what it is lol. Also, I hate him cause he kill Jackson first! Ugh Jackson why you're always dying on their story? Hahaha.
launchora_imgMhariel Luviano
6 years ago
*me
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