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After sunset the guests arrived and Zayn greeted his in-laws warmly.

they all sat down out at the backyard garden, with their eyes fixed on little Jannah, waiting to see the miracle. But Jannah kept her silence all the time, leaving them frustrated and disappointed.

In the meantime, Lena had finally found Summer up on one of the trees, deep inside the mountain forest.

''Are you planning on coming down or what'' 

''Mom?!''

''Yes, and you better get down from there''.

Summer jumped down, ''Don't expect me to see your old man'' said Summer.

''ok, but what about your uncle? he is very fond of you''.

''Mom, i have five of them, exactly which one are we talking about?''

Lena laughed while patting Summer's back ''All of them honey, we are talking about all of them''

''No wait now, this Omar one, he definitely has something against me, even his kid hates me! not that i feel any different towards them'' smirked summer as speaking.

''Look Summer, they are family, and we don't turn our backs on family even if they do so'' ''Now if you please come back with me to Hilda's, i left your dress there since i'm sure they have arrived by now.''

''Can i ask something'' said Summer on their way down the mountain.

''What colour is my dress?''. ''Oooh, are you interested now?!'' giggled Lena as speaking. ''NO!, i'm just saying, if it was red or white i'll happily meet them in my current outfit'' replied summer.

As the night started covering the horizon, Lena and Summer were finally at Hilda's house. And after half an hour, they were ready to meet their grand guests.

When they reached the house, summer noticed her grandparents at the backyard garden, so she decided to peacefully avoid any contact with them.

''Look who showed up, I didn't know that hosts came AFTER their guests' arrival'' was the first thing Lena heard from her eldest brother, Omar.

''Sorry brother, we had some things that kept us busy, you know we would never miss the chance of seeing u'' said Lena as she drew nearer, opening her arms wide to take in her brother.

''Now you need to hurry up and meet father, he is losing his patience'' said Ali, her other older brother. without commenting, rushed Lena to her parents.

''You grew up Summer! just look at how tall you are now!'' Said Ali, her uncle to break the ice.

''Yeah uncle, and i see your daughters are older too'' replied Summer.

''Haha, why don't you get in and meet the rest, they've been waiting for you''

''you know uncle, even IF i wanted to meet everybody, i'd still stay here fearing facing grandpa''

''Don't worry, that was long ago and i'm sure you've changed since then, i can sense it''

''so you won't comfort me and tell me that he has changed too, will you?''

''I'm afraid not, after you reach that age, changing is unquestionably impossible'' Said Ali as he was heading back in. ''Now come on, your uncles and cousins have been asking for you''

''Sigh, do i hate family gatherings or what'' murmured Summer .

''OMG Summer!'' shouted Irina, the cousin of summer.

''You are wearing a fluffy dress!'' continued Irina mockingly.

''Believe me when i tell you this, but i had no other choice'' said Summer as covering her face with her hand.

''lift me up, cousin!'' said a young voice, Summer looked down to find her other cousin, Lamees.

Noor then entered the room with Janna.''Good job girl, they will have to wait for another five years before they hear you say anything'' said Noor happily.

''Oh, so you decided to keep them anxious Janna'' said Summer.

''It's not like that. I didn't know what to say to those old geezers'' replied Janna, leaving everybody in the room astonished while Summer and Noor were laughing.

''The cat didn't eat your tongue i see, then why didn't you answer your grandpa when he was talking to you?!''. ''Now you made dad look like a joke!'' Said Hind angrily at Janna.

''Easy there, she's still a baby, i'm sure grandpa will understand'' went Halla.

Now i shall introduce the guests.

First is the family's head, Juarre. He is Lena's father.

Next is Lareen, Lena's mother.

They have six children, five boys and a girl.

their names are, starting from the eldest, Omar, Ali, Mazen, Lena,Allaa and finally Adham.

The older three brothers are married, but the younger two aren't.

Omar has four kids: Zeyad, Halla, Adam and Iyad. Ali has three kids: Irina, Malek and Lamees. Mazen also has three, they are Sarah, Lian and Asser.

All the women were gathered in the living room and the men were in the lounge. outside were Lena, Zayn, the grandparents and some more of the Floga supremes.

Summer felt uncomfortable in that crowded room and went out, as she was walking she stumbled on Mazen, her uncle who was carrying Lian and Asser.

''Uncle!, how are you doing?'' said Summer politely.

''Well, how do i look to you?, do i look fine?'' Said Mazen while laughing and handing her Lian and Asser.

''Be a good girl for me and give them to their mother, i can't keep up with their fighting anymore!'' Continued Mazen.

''Yes sir, i'll take them to aunty Zeinab'' replied Summer.

After she delivered the kids to their mommy, she headed outside to the front garden to cool her head down and get away from all the annoying crying and chatter.

then she heard a voice from behind saying, ''What on the animal kingdom where you doing at the mountains earlier, girl??''

And as Summer turned back it continued, ''You know the grounds hide no one'' that's when she saw Adam, her favourite uncle, and ran at him.

''Oooh, you got heavier i must say'' said Adam as lifting Summer up.

''I can't believe you're still single, uncle! i mean how old are you?!''

''Age matters not!, i look young enough to stay single, don't I?'' said Adam in an all high and mighty attitude, making his little niece laugh her guts out.

''You sure are better left alone, uncle'' laughed Summer as speaking.


(This story started as a manga project -japanese comic- at first but then since i haven't had time to work on my drawing skills i just wrote it as a novel till i become able of drawing it one day -hopefully- In the meantime, here is how they would look like! https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-_FaRkLgbtz4/VVhuAjhEy_I/AAAAAAAAACo/a5Gw9px2cDo/w346-h558/2015 - 1 )


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launchora_imgLaunchora User
8 years ago
I would be happy if we could contact each other for help.
launchora_imgragaa helal
8 years ago
sorry if my reply is too late but it would delight me to receive or give any tips concerning my work =] here's my email: ragaa.roro@hotmail.com feel freeto ask anything or discuss anything and thanks for the offer.
launchora_imgBigby Wolf
8 years ago
The drawings you added of the girls really help in visualizing the story! Good job. Waiting for chapter 3 :)
launchora_imgragaa helal
8 years ago
awww thanks for reading the story ^_^ next chapter coming soon~
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