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Walang Pakialamanan

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Akala ko ba walang pakialamanan?
Bakit pag magkadikit kami may sasabihin ka ng biglaan
Hindi na nga namin kayo pinupuna
Kaya please lang wag ka ng kumontra

Isa pang sabi mo sa salitang iyon
Baka di ako makapagpigil at masagot kita ng di mahinahon
Isa pang rinig ko sa salitang iyong binibigkas
Masisigawan na kita ng malakas.

Sisigaw ng malakas sabay bigkas
Anong problema mo? Di ka naman inaano
Pag sumagot ka ng walang kupas
Baka di kita matantsa at makita mo ikay iiyak ng malakas.

Konting asar pa at akoy mapupuno na
Isang hirit mo pa,ilalabas ko ang aking sandata
Baka makita mo bigla ka nalang bumulagta
Dahil sasabihin ko'y katotohanan ngunit walang halong malisya.

Baka gusto mo pang marealtalk kita
Sige pa humirit ka pa ng isa
Makikita mo ang dapat makita
Lalabas ang aking pagkamaldita

Marahil inggit ang iyong nadarama
Dahil wala kang kadikit at kasama
Kasalanan ko ba kung mas inuna ng mahal mo ang iba
Kesa sayo na tila pang sidekick lang pala.

Bahala ka na, bahala din kami
Walang pakealamanan, walang pansinan
Matuto kang lumugar kung ano ang iyong binigkas ng harapan
Tuparin mo naman para masabing hindi yun puro kashitan.

Oo na ako na ang maldita
Pero lumalabas lang to pag may pabida
Sige pa subukan mo pang dumada
Baka sa susunod wala ka ng makuda.

Oo sige manglaban ka pa
Hinding hindi ka na namin papakialaman pa
Bahala ka na kung iwan ka din niyan
Tingin ko pag lumala ito wala ka ng babalikan.

Mauubos ang iyong kaibigan
Lalo na sa pinapakita mong maling katapangan
Makikita mo nalang na kami'y lilisan
At maiiwan kang luhaan dahil samin at sa iyong kasintahan.


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launchora_imgChoco Shake
5 years ago
Good work but can you express your feeling in a more literary way? If this is a poem, it does need rhymes, but it also needs metaphors. Creating literary pieces is not just holding a pen and write what you feel, it needs also, creativity.
launchora_imgNeko Kagami
5 years ago
Good piece and straight to the point. ? Not to offend or anything, you may want to edit some parts like "haling" to "halong" and "tupadin" to "tuparin". ?
launchora_imgAndi G.
5 years ago
thank youuu. Ill make sure to do that ? thanks tho ?
launchora_imgNeko Kagami
5 years ago
welcome ? you may also want to check on my works and give a feeback or review, or join my convo on The Bar "Open to reviews and feedback" ?
launchora_imgAndi G.
5 years ago
okay okay =))
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