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Perfection

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You are really beautiful but....

you still need to lose a few pounds

And you will be perfect.


You are really intelligent but....

you still need to score higher

And you'll be perfect.


You are a really amazing writer but....

you still need to acquire depth to portray your emotions

And you'll be perfect.


You are a really great singer but....

you still need to bring forth a certain force in your voice

And you'll be perfect.


And in trying to impress those people,

 who only gave compliments just,

to turn them into harsh criticism with those 'buts'.


And in trying to be the epitome of perfection,

As portrayed by those peers,

who only wanted to pull me down.


Somewhere, I lost my true self 

In trying to be someone else's mundane idea

Of a perfection which doesn't really exist....








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launchora_imgLaunchora User
4 years ago
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launchora_imgPink Panther
5 years ago
Great Poetry!! And really we just need to be ourself completely and shouldn't try to please anyone else.
launchora_imgAndriya May
5 years ago
hmm... absolutely bro.
Cultural Imperialism plays a huge role in shaping minds, seeking perfection is just a false attempt to express one's identity
launchora_imgAndriya May
5 years ago
absolutely correct. i know it just seems so strange right, to expect perfection of someone when you dont even know the defintion of perfection.
I believe that the word 'perfect' is not reffered to something material and real, It's more mythological since nothing is really perfect except the image of gods in relegions.
launchora_imgAndriya May
5 years ago
hey wow thats exactly my thoughts.
I'm glad we share the same point of view :)
launchora_imgAndriya May
5 years ago
yeah hopefully more people think this way so that the stigma around perfection is somewhat reduced
That would be PERFECT lol
launchora_imgAndriya May
5 years ago
haha...
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